So, this week was actually pretty interesting because of how the treatments were collaborated. In film, it's nice to have that person or that group that you guys can bounce ideas off of. What makes sense to you may actually be really confusing. Trying to hit all the aspects of a film noir mood though was more difficult than we originally thought. It wasn't just about how it was shot, it was also about how the story developed. Because of that, some things were over thought and suddenly didn't seem all that believable for a high schooler anymore. Take for example the character's flaw. That was such an easy part to over think. You could have made him a thief, a pyromanic, a killer... but all you really had to think about was a realistic flaw. A chip in this seemingly normal person, be it that they say yes to everything, are too passionate, etc.
As mentioned above, the most challenging part for Stephanie and I was the writing. The combining of our treatments actually went smoothly, but we suffered writer's block when rewriting the treatment. The thing about writer's block and artist's block is that (from my experience) it's mainly based of creativity and influence. If your thoughts don't flow, then you could be stuck for a while. It's even worse when you and your partner have it. However, mistakes are meant to be made which is why through this you really learn that writing is rewriting. Having a go at it and taking in other people's considerations really help the block move inch by inch.
Overall, working with others is a skill you need in film. It's a helpful one too because even if your idea lacks in some manner, you get to have another try at it because people will suggest their opinions to you. Constructive criticism was really helpful for this story, especially when Stephanie and I succumbed to writer's block.
I also hate writer's block because you may have a really good idea but then not know how to really continue it.
ReplyDeleteI liked constructive criticism as well because it opened the door to solutions which is what many needed in order to have a better story, especially when writing a film noir story since it was harder than I thought it would be--just like you said.
Even so, it was nice to write in the style of film noir because it was a new challenge that allowed to grow as storytellers. :)
I actually really liked your idea. It had a solid foundation. I loved how infused the poets' names into your film. It was very ingenious of you :) I also hate writer's block. It's one of the worst feelings you can ever get as a writer, but you pulled through.
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